10y ago Humayun I enjoyed reading "Her shy voice a lovely memory / singing a sweet lullaby for me" Write A Poem For Me
10y ago Humayun I found this especially beautiful: "...single tear / washing the land of impurities" Tritina: salvation
Humayun I enjoyed the story you told in this one!
Consolatory Lap
Humayun really enjoyed the rhythm in this one!
Dirty Hands
Humayun really enjoyed the poignancy of this one
2nd Tuesday of Every Month
Humayun something about this I really enjoyed!
"The Willing Spirit"
Humayun loved the storytelling approach!
Now Ponder Well You Parents
Humayun very enjoyable!
Jazz (A Name That Fits)
Humayun melancholy and poignant
Loneliness Is
Humayun beautifully written
When Lilacs Turn To Lilies
Humayun an interesting use of imagery
Beautiful Boy
Humayun what a happy poem!
birthday for rose choji bon
Humayun Bleak, but enjoyed the story
Come In Through The Backdoor
Humayun Made my spine tingle- beautifully written!
murderer
Humayun Eerie!
L'appel Du Vide
Humayun I loved the picture this made in my head.
Flotsam
Humayun Beautiful imagery!
settle down now
Humayun Loved the line "laying in an iron mine of a bed"
To An Old Friend In War
Humayun Enjoyed the description of despair as "a shatter of glass"
Sonnet:Despair
Humayun I enjoyed reading "Her shy voice a lovely memory / singing a sweet lullaby for me"
Write A Poem For Me
Humayun Highly evocative: the phrase "nine points of a constellation"
Rebound
Humayun I found this especially beautiful: "...single tear / washing the land of impurities"
Tritina: salvation