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Eric Scott Grand
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Eric Scott Grand
So deep... seems like you are going through some tough time in your life... May god heal all_/\_
Life Is Finding Your True Self
𝕊𝕠𝕞𝕖𝕥𝕚𝕞𝕖𝕤. . .
I appreciate the ones that rhyme haha… very relatable ideas, and beautifully articulated
Love the sensation of your words
White to Red
Love this poem!
I love how the suspense really builds up before it all drops in the ending. Nice poem 😃
Walking After Dark
Thanks so much 😊
The Land Beyond the Stars
Hi, I love your poem, it’s beautifully Vivid and splendid. 😁🦋❤️
cottage of new beginnings
Hi, I lov your poem, it’s pure golden and spectacular 😁🎁🦋
not a maze
Hi, your poem’s Truly Magnificent and Inspiring 😁🎂🎁
I’ve reread this like 4 times I love it, how u tied in Pluto, “even if mine crumbles”, amazing.
*apples, mirrors, snow
That’s what I was going for 😊. To bring a sense of home in misery and fear of getting better
I love this
I choose to Love you
Thank you so much for the positive feedback! It really means the world to me:)
Of all the brevity, slice-of-life poems tend to be my favorite. I really enjoyed this delicate piece.
What I love about this piece (besides your provocative precision with metaphor) is how you dance with internal rhyme within your meter! This poem is so visceral, and it's really something to follow the maze of lines through transitions to conclusions. Where I thought you'd zig with rhyme you'd zag!
I love the two stanzas and the way you related the blue to swimming through uncharted waters was familiar yet surprised me. Very clever write, all together.