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What I love about this piece (besides your provocative precision with metaphor) is how you dance with internal rhyme within your meter! This poem is so visceral, and it's really something to follow the maze of lines through transitions to conclusions. Where I thought you'd zig with rhyme you'd zag!
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I love the two stanzas and the way you related the blue to swimming through uncharted waters was familiar yet surprised me. Very clever write, all together.
dixie Esch Love the sensation of your words
White to Red
helen reyes Love this poem!
Lonely
poetry ghost I love how the suspense really builds up before it all drops in the ending. Nice poem 😃
Walking After Dark
poetry ghost Thanks so much 😊
The Land Beyond the Stars
Muniza Master Hi, I love your poem, it’s beautifully Vivid and splendid. 😁🦋❤️
cottage of new beginnings
Muniza Master Hi, I lov your poem, it’s pure golden and spectacular 😁🎁🦋
not a maze
Muniza Master Hi, your poem’s Truly Magnificent and Inspiring 😁🎂🎁
The Land Beyond the Stars
rose poems I’ve reread this like 4 times I love it, how u tied in Pluto, “even if mine crumbles”, amazing.
*apples, mirrors, snow
poetry ghost That’s what I was going for 😊. To bring a sense of home in misery and fear of getting better
Peaceful War
rose poems I love this
I choose to Love you
Wordlyliving Thank you so much for the positive feedback! It really means the world to me:)
Liver
six pm Of all the brevity, slice-of-life poems tend to be my favorite. I really enjoyed this delicate piece.
Observation
six pm What I love about this piece (besides your provocative precision with metaphor) is how you dance with internal rhyme within your meter! This poem is so visceral, and it's really something to follow the maze of lines through transitions to conclusions. Where I thought you'd zig with rhyme you'd zag!
Liver
six pm I love the two stanzas and the way you related the blue to swimming through uncharted waters was familiar yet surprised me. Very clever write, all together.
This One
six pm This poem went in a direction I didn't expect it to. I wonder if it's more that you don't 'need' help rather than that maybe you don't want it?
Peaceful War
six pm I like that you kept this in a paragraph of sorts. The shape is contained like a box and it adds to the confessional spirit of the work imo.
heights
Robin Jace Tomeo When I write my art I don’t have specifics, every reader perceive things differently.
Can you heal me Father?
rose poems thank you :))
not a maze
six pm A labyrinth of roots and the ideas that blossom and bud.
garden
six pm Your refrains and the following remind me of philosophies that say, 'heaven is here on earth'. And I really like that.
The Land Beyond the Stars