Love this poem!
I love how the suspense really builds up before it all drops in the ending. Nice poem 😃
Walking After Dark
Thanks so much 😊
The Land Beyond the Stars
Hi, I love your poem, it’s beautifully Vivid and splendid. 😁🦋❤️
cottage of new beginnings
Hi, I lov your poem, it’s pure golden and spectacular 😁🎁🦋
not a maze
Hi, your poem’s Truly Magnificent and Inspiring 😁🎂🎁
I’ve reread this like 4 times I love it, how u tied in Pluto, “even if mine crumbles”, amazing.
*apples, mirrors, snow
That’s what I was going for 😊. To bring a sense of home in misery and fear of getting better
I love this
I choose to Love you
Thank you so much for the positive feedback! It really means the world to me:)
Of all the brevity, slice-of-life poems tend to be my favorite. I really enjoyed this delicate piece.
What I love about this piece (besides your provocative precision with metaphor) is how you dance with internal rhyme within your meter! This poem is so visceral, and it's really something to follow the maze of lines through transitions to conclusions. Where I thought you'd zig with rhyme you'd zag!
I love the two stanzas and the way you related the blue to swimming through uncharted waters was familiar yet surprised me. Very clever write, all together.
This poem went in a direction I didn't expect it to. I wonder if it's more that you don't 'need' help rather than that maybe you don't want it?
I like that you kept this in a paragraph of sorts. The shape is contained like a box and it adds to the confessional spirit of the work imo.
Robin Jace Tomeo
When I write my art I don’t have specifics, every reader perceive things differently.
Can you heal me Father?
thank you :))
A labyrinth of roots and the ideas that blossom and bud.
Your refrains and the following remind me of philosophies that say, 'heaven is here on earth'. And I really like that.
I like your subtle rhyme in maze and made. You have a really nice cadence.