9y ago Meredith Hehe! Like myself eh? That eh was especially for all you Canadians there. Testing Waters
9y ago dan so now you're forty...did you end up finding dory?...bet she was just caught up in her own story ;) Testing Waters
9y ago Meredith No not today, it's this Wednesday coming up, and nothing planned, except finding Dory. Lol! Testing Waters
9y ago Heather Gillian Sad! I'm still new to this but can I suggest you try free verse with no rhyme? I thought you really captured something here but were restrained by the rhyme scheme? It made some of the sentences clumsy, hiding their beauty. 10
9y ago Meredith Immaturity? Insightful? The perceptions of importance of life journeys and outcomes. Testing Waters
9y ago dan been meaning to ask, is your real name Merideth? and if it not troubles, how old r u? Testing Waters
9y ago dan unbothered, but only bothered by it-i want to be seen by me as u r, and have u seen by me as you are Testing Waters
9y ago dan because if I don't bother, no one would be bothered by/with me...I'd ever be invisible here, Testing Waters
Meredith That's funny! Did you just make that up?
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Meredith Haha! I have your answer here! ;)
Who am I?
dan first was the "C", and we said "eh", then "N","eh", and "D","eh" ;)
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dan do you know how Canada was named? we drew letters from a hat...
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Meredith Hehe! Like myself eh? That eh was especially for all you Canadians there.
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dan so now you're forty...did you end up finding dory?...bet she was just caught up in her own story ;)
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Humayun Incredibly painful. And beautiful.
Grieving Black Hole
Meredith Thanks much though! Life is full of wonder everyday! :)
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Meredith No not today, it's this Wednesday coming up, and nothing planned, except finding Dory. Lol!
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dan lol, ya...something like that. happy birthday! :D doing anything fun?
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Heather Gillian I get it.
i try
Heather Gillian Agreed. This poem just gets it!
I don't know
Heather Gillian Love this.
you slept like a hamburger
Heather Gillian Sad! I'm still new to this but can I suggest you try free verse with no rhyme? I thought you really captured something here but were restrained by the rhyme scheme? It made some of the sentences clumsy, hiding their beauty.
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Meredith Immaturity? Insightful? The perceptions of importance of life journeys and outcomes.
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dan 40...congrats! not bad for someone forever young :)
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Meredith Yes it is, and I am forty next Wednesday.
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dan been meaning to ask, is your real name Merideth? and if it not troubles, how old r u?
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dan unbothered, but only bothered by it-i want to be seen by me as u r, and have u seen by me as you are
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dan because if I don't bother, no one would be bothered by/with me...I'd ever be invisible here,
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