Everyone

Humayun I enjoyed the emotion in this one!

MOTHER

Martin Brits Hello Geri and thank you, for reading my poems.

Happen

najma maalin yeah sure :) & thank you that means alot

want this world to be better

Humayun Hi, and welcome! I'm enjoying your words, and had one thought: to make it easier for me to read, and if it fits with your poetry, would you consider typing a return in between each line?

want this world to be better

Martin Brits Deep the wounds in Africa so dark the war a gun pointing at my fore head.

THE DARK WAR

CORNEL PUNK o!

Grape Juice

CORNEL PUNK love is all about happiness and sadness

An Undeniable Ending

Humayun poignant and beautiful

An Undeniable Ending

Humayun Love the use of colors!

Grape Juice

Humayun I enjoyed the story you told in this one!

Consolatory Lap

Humayun really enjoyed the rhythm in this one!

Dirty Hands

Martin Brits Deep the words to an- ex lover, for Martin to appreciate Montana a poet of note.

To An Ex-Lover, With Good Intentions

Humayun really enjoyed the poignancy of this one

2nd Tuesday of Every Month

Humayun something about this I really enjoyed!

"The Willing Spirit"

Humayun loved the storytelling approach!

Now Ponder Well You Parents

Humayun very enjoyable!

Jazz (A Name That Fits)

Humayun melancholy and poignant

Loneliness Is

Humayun beautifully written

When Lilacs Turn To Lilies

Sherry Asbury Sounds like my house! Three cats and an old lady who loves knick knacks. I love the strident, harried tone of the poem. Very nice work.

Happen

Humayun an interesting use of imagery

Beautiful Boy