Everyone

Humayun what a happy poem!

birthday for rose choji bon

Humayun Bleak, but enjoyed the story

Come In Through The Backdoor

Geri Oh, this was so good! " damp enough to rot the hardwood floors". Nice.

murderer

Humayun Made my spine tingle- beautifully written!

murderer

Humayun Eerie!

L'appel Du Vide

Humayun I loved the picture this made in my head.

Flotsam

Geri "Looking through the window past my bonsai tree" That brought a vivid image to me.

To An Old Friend In War

Humayun Beautiful imagery!

settle down now

Humayun Loved the line "laying in an iron mine of a bed"

To An Old Friend In War

Humayun Enjoyed the description of despair as "a shatter of glass"

Sonnet:Despair

Humayun I enjoyed reading "Her shy voice a lovely memory / singing a sweet lullaby for me"

Write A Poem For Me

Humayun Highly evocative: the phrase "nine points of a constellation"

Rebound

Humayun I found this especially beautiful: "...single tear / washing the land of impurities"

Tritina: salvation

Humayun Loved the "voice like wine" phrase- I can visualize it now!

Pan Sang to Me Last Night

Rie Sheridan Rose I am going to have to look into the form of the tritina so that I can grasp all the nuances. Compelling imagery.

Tritina: salvation

Rie Sheridan Rose Thanks, Alan

Two Birds

Alan Liu Love the imagery

Two Birds

Humayun dark, but feels true

A Man So Free

Humayun test

Happen

Humayun Enjoyed the feeling of the world spinning around me!

tornado