11y ago Sherry Asbury Sounds like my house! Three cats and an old lady who loves knick knacks. I love the strident, harried tone of the poem. Very nice work. Happen
11y ago Geri "Looking through the window past my bonsai tree" That brought a vivid image to me. To An Old Friend In War
11y ago Humayun I enjoyed reading "Her shy voice a lovely memory / singing a sweet lullaby for me" Write A Poem For Me
Humayun really enjoyed the poignancy of this one
2nd Tuesday of Every Month
Humayun something about this I really enjoyed!
"The Willing Spirit"
Humayun loved the storytelling approach!
Now Ponder Well You Parents
Humayun very enjoyable!
Jazz (A Name That Fits)
Humayun melancholy and poignant
Loneliness Is
Humayun beautifully written
When Lilacs Turn To Lilies
Sherry Asbury Sounds like my house! Three cats and an old lady who loves knick knacks. I love the strident, harried tone of the poem. Very nice work.
Happen
Humayun an interesting use of imagery
Beautiful Boy
Humayun what a happy poem!
birthday for rose choji bon
Humayun Bleak, but enjoyed the story
Come In Through The Backdoor
Geri Oh, this was so good! " damp enough to rot the hardwood floors". Nice.
murderer
Humayun Made my spine tingle- beautifully written!
murderer
Humayun Eerie!
L'appel Du Vide
Humayun I loved the picture this made in my head.
Flotsam
Geri "Looking through the window past my bonsai tree" That brought a vivid image to me.
To An Old Friend In War
Humayun Beautiful imagery!
settle down now
Humayun Loved the line "laying in an iron mine of a bed"
To An Old Friend In War
Humayun Enjoyed the description of despair as "a shatter of glass"
Sonnet:Despair
Humayun I enjoyed reading "Her shy voice a lovely memory / singing a sweet lullaby for me"
Write A Poem For Me
Humayun Highly evocative: the phrase "nine points of a constellation"
Rebound